Author Topic: All the Wars }{ Sue's new war-in-Iraq story }{ Sue (Read 343 times)

sue · « **on:** October 07, 2005, 08:50:45 PM »

Hi all! I'm writing a new, moving story called "All the Wars." If you are a complete Bush supporter and support the War in Iraq, I'd recommend you not read this, even though this is what people are really going through.

Here's a summary: Bascially there's this rich junior (in high school) named Rochelle Massey, and she goes to some fancy private school and is going through a lot because something (not yet told) happened to her mother and her father is never ever home. She's hanging with her friends one day when she gets a phone call from the US consolate telling her a boy her age, his Iraqi name is translated to John, will be staying with her for a year, due to danger to his Iraqi lifestyle ( takes place in the present). So, John turns out to be really amazing, and the rest of the story is about how Rochelle and John slowly fall in love, but there's a lot of conflict within (ALL THE WARS). It tells how Rochelle is always hating her dad because of how he's never there, and about how John has to fit in, and also at Rochelle's school, the teachers are biased, brainwashed, and ignorant, and she gets in HUGE trouble for speaking out against Bush and this terrible terrible war, and eventually writes a letter to Bush while John receives a distrubing one from home... wait and see!

WARNING: The story isn't set in Iraq, but references are pretty disturbing. There will be some cursing (hey, it's high school), sexual references and content, and perhaps some mild violence (we'll see how I feel). If you're the type of person who prefers to close their eyes to that sort of thing, go ahead. For the younger viewers, precaution is advised (but ppl like BL, Obi, and especially JF please read!) and that's about all....

First chappie coming up soon!

Leah · « **Reply #1 on:** October 07, 2005, 10:20:06 PM »

Bush SUX.

Leah · « **Reply #2 on:** October 07, 2005, 10:21:16 PM »

Especially JF haha! You know i'll read, cuz Bush SUX SUX SUX SUX all the ppl in NJ or in my town are Bush supporters but me and this other guy in my class aren't so we are friends haha!

Csoup715 · « **Reply #3 on:** October 07, 2005, 10:28:33 PM »

bush needs to die in a hole.

Leah · « **Reply #4 on:** October 07, 2005, 10:44:21 PM »

You read my mind!

sue · « **Reply #5 on:** October 08, 2005, 12:10:38 AM »

Bush IS a hole!

Leah · « **Reply #6 on:** October 08, 2005, 01:26:45 PM »

You read my mind TOO!

lol

sue · « **Reply #7 on:** October 10, 2005, 08:01:55 PM »

Ya know, I'm probably the only 17-year old pacifist you'll ever meet. But, then again, you haven't met me. You don't know anything about me. Here, let me help you with that.

I haven't always been like this. I was just a normal, rich, princess about nine months ago. Then I went away. Or, I guess a better, wiser me came back.

I guess it all began those nine months ago, when I was just plain Rochelle Massey.

That day, in early September went something like this:

I came home from Bellman High, and I hate coming home. I loved school. I loved my best friends in the world, Camilla and Jess. I begged them to come hang out, but sadly they're the sporty over-booked types. How was I so popular by being JUST a princess?

Now why would I need company if I OBVIOUSLY had a life?

It was always that first minute that I stepped in the door that killed me. I would always do the exact same thing no matter who was with me; toss my purse and bag over my shoulder, shoo away any maid that was hovering by, turn on my phone, and skim the note "Daddy" left me, then proceed to tearing it right down the middle.

I guess I should have read the note that day, before grabbing a Starbucks frappucino and trudging up to my "tower."

My phone always rang when I reached the bed, and I'd always flop down and converse.

It rang that day, too.

"Hello?" I said between sips.

"Miss Massey?" A voice said into the receiver.

"Yeah?" I snapped, sure it was a stupid evil solicitor person.

"Miss Massey, I'm Jim Bowen, the American consolate. I'm good friends with your father?"

"Oh yeah...." I whined, recalling Daddy's obese free-loading consolate friend.

"I'm sure your father has already booked your car."

"My Ferrari BETTER be here by my birthday. If we were in, say, L.A. I could drive it." In case I forgot to say, we lived in the Hamptons.

"Alright, well, the car will taking you to the airport momentarily."

"WHAT?" I thought. Was Daddy Dearest getting rid of me? What if I went to a family that was.... POOR?

"Oh dear, your father hasn't told you." Bowens said. "Apparently you're having a male Iraqi visitor in your house to protest the current war."

"Oooh." I thought, terrrrrible things running through my mind. "A senior?"

"Ahem, your age."

I stamped my foot on the carpet. I really wanted a senior.

But why was Jason (Daddy) STUPID enough to leave a junior girl home with a junior boy ALL DAY LONG? I loved Daddy's stupidity.

"What's he look like?"

"You'll find momentarily. He will be at the JFK airport very soon. Tata." I hate when old fat bastards say that.

I guess I hopped outside, tweaking my hair a bit, wating to meet my new roomie. I was more concerned about what an ASSHOLE my father had been.

TO BE CONTINUED

Miss Bloom · « **Reply #8 on:** October 10, 2005, 08:07:21 PM »

That was really good, Sue. Keep up the good work.

sue · « **Reply #9 on:** October 10, 2005, 11:52:21 PM »

*bows* Thank, you, Thank, you! I made her Rochelle cause, well... It's such a pretty name

Leah · « **Reply #10 on:** October 11, 2005, 10:23:18 AM »

That was really good!

corndog · « **Reply #11 on:** October 28, 2005, 12:37:17 AM »

well i have to agree this is good, i want to see another chapter

i probably will like it considering i am somewhat of an anarchist and I completly despise the government of today. They say nothing but lies and stuff so i need another chapter lol