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« on: November 21, 2005, 11:38:01 PM »
Here's a short info thingie, I know, it's a weird story lol:
LWTL is a new sitcom I?m creating and writing! It is a family show, similar to Full House, but with a much larger bunch of kids! A G-rated sitcom, 9 kids, 2 parents, BIG TROUBLE! Watch/read how Laura and Nick learn to deal with all 9 Lacowskis. I haven?t actually finished the 1st story yet, but here?s some information:
MEET THE LACOWSKIS:
5 daughters:
Eileen Lacowski: 15, the oldest Lacowski, and the popular girl in school, though absolutely not snobby, she is compassionate, caring, and loves animals! Black hair, dark brown eyes, and very pale skin.
Paul Lacowski: 14, 2nd oldest, loves to play basketball. Plays mean jokes and pranks on Eileen all the time. Brown hair, brown eyes, & tan skin.
Carmen Lacowski: Wants to be as popular as Eileen, get better grades than Eileen, basically envious of Eileen. Brown hair, blue eyes, and very tan skin.
Samantha Lacowski: 11, the 6th grader of the family. Has horrible teachers, but gets good grades. Loves animals and literature. Brown hair, green-blue eyes, pale skin.
Timothy Lacowski: 10, often mistaken for his twin brother, Tommy. Loves to play soccer. Blonde hair, green eyes.
Tommy Lacowski: 10, often mistaken for Timothy. The nerd. Loves to make robots and other high-tech things. You name it, he?s (at least tried to) create it! Blonde hair, green eyes.
Colleen Lacowski: 8, The dancer. She doesn?t dance ballet?she dances hip hop! Dreams of becoming a star. Blonde, curly hair, blue eyes.
Blake Lacowski: 4, the preschooler of the family. Loves frogs. Hates pancakes and sausages. Curly red hair, light brown eyes.
Bridget Lacowski: 3, the nursery brat. Always gets what she wants! Tattletale. Brown hair, green eyes.
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[size=9]LIFE WITH THE LACOWSKIS[/size]
EPISODE 1: THE WHOLE TRUTH
WRITTEN BY: LEAH
Summary: Paul starts a rumor about Eileen that makes her look really bad. Bad things start happening to Eileen after that. Her prom date breaks up with her. Carmen completely ignores her, as usual, but Samantha is starting to agree with Carmen and ignore Eileen! Eileen has no idea what to do, until?
Meanwhile, Bridget and Blake don?t start school until next week, so they become busy devising a way to teepee Colleen?s room, though it?s nowhere near mischief night. They are jealous of Colleen! They want to be big stars!
Laura and Nick are surrounded by Eileen asking for help with her problem, Samantha asking about the huge amount of homework given by her horrible teachers, Paul asking to buy more trick stuff from the Prank Catalog, Bridget and Blake asking everyone for toilet paper, Tom collecting parts from all the gadgets in the house, making them unusable, and Tim with is big soccer tournament. Carmen is left out again! What will happen?
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?Why isn?t this coffee machine working?? Nick asked. ?I WANT MY COFFEE!? Laura smiled and said ?You and your coffee. I think it?s Tom. He?s been taking parts from everything all over the house for some kind of device.? ?Oh gosh!? Nick said, sulking. ?Well he better be making a new coffee maker for me!?
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A pretty girl with black hair, dark brown eyes, and pale skin walks down the hallway at school, with a bunch of blonde girls with blue eyes surrounding her. The typical stereotyped ?popular girls?. Everyone seems to huddle around the black haired girl in the middle. They all want to know her. They all want to become friends with her just so they can become popular.
?Back off!? Eileen shouted. She usually wasn?t the one to have a huge temper, but these wannabes were just driving her crazy! ?This has happened before. The only reason you all want to be friends with me is to become popular! I hate when people do that! I want real friends!? She ran away. The blondes just stood there, unsure of what to do, and then flipped their hair and walked quickly away toward where Eileen was headed.
Eileen was walking down the hall so briskly that she didn?t see the nerd boy, Anthony, walking toward her. She crashed with a ?SMACK!? right into Anthony.
Once Anthony and Eileen got up, Anthony snorted the ?nerd snort? (as the people in Eileen?s high school, Elizabeth Ferata High School, call it) and exclaimed ?I?m so *snort* sorry *snort* Eileen!
?It?s okay,? Eileen stated, and then she walked around him. She didn?t mean to be impolite, but she didn?t want anything to do with this boy.
Paul crept up from behind the garbage can. He had been taking a drink from the water fountain, but when he heard Eileen coming, and saw Anthony coming, he just had to see what would happen, so he hid. Paul usually played tricks on Eileen, so now, as always, he was thinking up a good one.
Paul smiled. He had thought up a perfect scheme to make Eileen super embarrassed. And it had to do with a rumor.
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?AHHHHHHHHHHHH!? screamed Laura. She was at home with Bridget and Blake, because they didn?t have school yet. ?AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!? she screamed again. ?What have you DONE?? She was talking to Blake and Bridget, and referring to the fact that they had spread toilet paper all over the family room floor and were now ripping it into long strands that they could later use to throw all over Colleen?s room. As you can tell, they were pretty smart for 3 and 4 year olds.
Time went by quickly, and the family had their dinner. They all went to bed.
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The next day, Paul was up and ready to go to school. He secretly turned off Eileen?s alarm so she wouldn?t wake up and would be late for school. Then Paul would have enough time to announce his rumor to all the school?
Paul caught the ?early bus? as they call it, the one that comes at 6:30 that practically nobody is on, so he could have time to practice his plan. Then he arrived at school at 7:00, and he was ready.
When everyone was at their lockers (except for Eileen, Paul had checked in advance, Eileen was just now getting on the ?late bus?) Paul gave the signal on his walkie talkie to his friend and in this case co-rumor starter, John. Then, an ear-piercing screech went through the whole school by intercom. Paul stood up on a ladder at the end of the hall and shouted?
?LISTEN! LISTEN! I have an announcement to make?or rather, gossip to tell!? After hearing this, the girls (who looked like they didn?t care before) perked up and started jumping up and down shouting, ?TELL US! TELL US!? And the boys (who seemed super disinterested before, even looked a little interested, though they weren?t interested in that much gossip.
"As you know, I am Paul Lacowski.? Everyone was silent. Paul replied to the silence by saying ?Okay, maybe all of you don?t know me, but maybe you know me better as the brother of Eileen Lacowski?? Everyone nodded. Paul continued. ?Well?, he said, ?I?ve been reading her diary and checking up on what she tells my mom, dad, and other brothers and sisters, and I?ve found out some important news.? Someone from the crowd shouted out, ?WHAT! TELL US!?, so Paul went on. ?She has written that she has experienced the greatest feeling of her life. She said, and I ?quote? (and using his best Eileen impression, he said,) ?I met this great guy today, we bumped into each other in the hallway! I?m gonna ask him to the prom soon! I hope he says yes! Oh I love him so much!? Everyone laughed. ?Who is the guy?? John asked, from the crowd, just like he was supposed to.
?Yeah, who?? Everyone else muttered. They seemed to be getting excited. That?s what Paul was hoping would happen! ?She said it?s?? Paul made a long pause? ?Anthony Chrishandet!?
Everyone gasped. They couldn?t believe it?the most popular girl in school, in love with?THE NERD GUY? There was a long silence, until?
Eileen?s voice rang out from behind her brother. ?Can someone explain to me what is going on here??

To Be Continued?

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« Reply #1 on: November 30, 2005, 12:16:20 AM »
Very good. 10/10.
"Some dont believe he ever existed, but that isnt true. He was here, and he was real. The real question is what was he, and why was he here. Many rumors speculate as to what he was. Some believe he was some kind of demon worm creature who would pose as a librarian. Others believed he was an angel sent to spread the word of god. The truth is, I dont know what he was. All I know is what he taught me. Love, friendship, and what it means to truly live. Some call him a monster, something children are terrified by. I only know him by what he called himself. Weird 4." - nicest comment ever!

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« Reply #2 on: December 01, 2005, 07:15:08 PM »
Thank you weird4!  ;D