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« on: December 17, 2005, 03:30:06 PM »
Well...I decided to write this. While some of it may be fictional, it's based on true events, just like Sue's story (no i'm not copying off of you, this is at my school). So here you go, this is a little preview chapter thingie:

*It?s a quiet Monday morning at Zion, the morning went by quickly. Then the lunch bell rang. As usual, Leah went to get her lunch out of Miss T?s room, followed by the guys, running at top speed, almost crashing into her.
Leah: Guys! What?s your problem?
Rich: Sorry?I?m hungry.
Lukas: You?re ALWAYS hungry.
Carlo: Where?s Danielle?I mean, Josephette?
*You see, there is this kid in Zion named Joseph. REALLY ANNOYING! Everyone really doesn?t like him?and now, Danielle is starting to act like Joseph, really annoying, so I made up the name ?Josephette? and the guys started using it.
Leah: Probably in the cafeteria?eating pizza?*mutters* sitting with the popular clique?
Perry: What did you say?
Leah: Oh?nothing?
*Everyone went down to the cafeteria. Sure enough, Danielle was sitting with the ?popular clique?, as Leah called them, Danielle, Alyssa, Kathaleen, Casey, Allison, Taryn, and Gloria. They had all the laughs. Everybody was crowding around their table, as they always did.
Leah: *sigh* I?m stuck here again, sitting all by myself. This ALWAYS happens! This is such a small, private school, there is only 1 other girl, and she?s too popular to hang out with kids like me.
Jason: Don?t feel bad. I get left out sometimes too.
Leah: Well I?m gonna go over there and ask if I could sit with them.
Perry: Good luck.
*Leah walked over to the popular table and stood in front of Danielle and Alyssa.
Leah: May I sit with you?
Alyssa: Uh?Danielle can decide.
Danielle: *pauses* NO.
Leah: *really sad and angry* You guys are so unfair.
*Leah walked back to her table.
Carlo: How?d it go?
Leah: Bad. That?s the thing about Danielle: one day, you can be laughing together, and the next day, she could be telling you off.
Rich: Gee, I?m sorry. I always knew she was an idiot.
Lukas: I thought you liked her!
Rich: Shut up!
Perry: It?s nothing to worry about. We?re your friends.
Leah: Yeah, that?s true. But I?m the only girl at this table: there are 5 boys and 1 girl, but there are usually 6 boys and 1 girl. Evan?s at Disney World.
Rich: Well?just forget about it. It?s not that important.
Leah: I know it isn?t, but I?m still sad, I?m just a pointless being, aren?t I?
*Leah runs off to the bathroom, but since she?s the only girl who cares, nobody could even try to make her feel better.
Danielle: *talking to the clique* What a loser.

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« Reply #1 on: December 17, 2005, 04:37:36 PM »
*Leah runs back into the cafeteria. She's fine now, just a little upset. The guys immediately try to comfort her.
Lukas: Leah, don't feel bad.
Carlo: Yeah. Who wants to be friends with a Josephette anyway?
Leah: Well...you see, I do. You guys don't know what it's LIKE to be a girl. You wanna be popular. You wanna look good. Of course the 2nd one doesn't apply to me, though.
Jason: Well Danielle's an idiot.
Carlo: Yeah...she is. *opens some kind of foreign lunch*
Jason: EWWWWWWWWW that smells like sh*t!
Leah: *points finger sarcastically* Watch your language, young man!  ;D Just kidding!
*Everyone laughs, and they all forget about the situtation. But when Danielle comes back, they all ignore her.
Danielle: Hey, guys.
*silence*
Danielle: GUYS? GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUYS?
Leah: What makes you think we're gonna talk to you? I told them what you did at lunch...you completely blew me off for your popular friends.
Carlo: Yeah, Josephette.
Rich: Gee, you're acting JUST LIKE JOSEPH now.
Leah: Even worse. Joseph never completely ignored me.
Lukas: Leah can't even afford a friend like you.
Jason: She has no need for a friend like you.
Leah: You're the worst friend i've EVER had!
Danielle: Fine, guys! You just keep going on with your little fantasy. But you'll never be better than me. I've got...
Leah: Yeah, you've got the clique. The popular clique. Oh, they're so great. Let's all bow down to them, what do you say, guys?
*The guys laugh. Danielle makes the evil eye at them.
Danielle: Shut up. You're all losers, each one of you.
Leah: Well at least I have a life. All you do is make fun of people. You only do that to build up your confidence. If you didn't make fun of people...you'd be a weakling now. You'd be sitting in the corner with nobody to talk to, like I am.
Danielle: So...you're saying, if I don't diss people, i'll be sitting in a corner like the loser you are?
Rich: Hey, shut up. She is not a loser. You're the loser.
*Rich pushes Danielle into the wall.
Danielle: Whatever. I'm off.
*Danielle makes the loser sign (the "L" with her fingers) and then heads off towards the clique and starts gossiping.
Carlo: Same old Joseph.
Jason: Ette. Josephette.

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« Reply #2 on: December 17, 2005, 09:33:48 PM »
This is really good, Monica. You should continue these  :)  ;D

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« Reply #3 on: December 17, 2005, 09:35:00 PM »
Thank you for FINALLY reading these!

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« Reply #4 on: December 17, 2005, 09:36:47 PM »
You're welcome, when is your next chapter of this story??

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« Reply #5 on: December 17, 2005, 09:40:30 PM »
j/w wasn't Rich that jerka*s that insulted you a few weeks back?

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« Reply #6 on: December 17, 2005, 09:41:45 PM »
Yeah...it was longer than a few weeks though  :P

Regina Rules, to answer your question, i'll try to get another one done tonight!

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« Reply #7 on: December 17, 2005, 10:22:41 PM »
AH-HAH! Wait... are we talking about the same jerka*s? The one you spoke of in "Weird? I don't care!" in ur bloggio?

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« Reply #8 on: December 17, 2005, 10:34:54 PM »
Yessssssssssssssssssssssssss Sue!  ;D

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« Reply #9 on: December 17, 2005, 10:48:34 PM »
lol sorry for cursing

Danielle reminds me EXACTLY of my ex-friend Miranda the one who blew me off on Halloween and she's the loser!!!

And at least u HAVE friends when popular girls are biatches to me, no one cares

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« Reply #10 on: December 17, 2005, 10:52:48 PM »
I only have like 3 or 4 friends who are boys, and that's not really even enough for me.

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« Reply #11 on: December 17, 2005, 10:56:31 PM »
Boys are good but what happens if you like a really good guy friend?!

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« Reply #12 on: December 17, 2005, 10:58:38 PM »
Eh, I fell for a guy friend of mine when I was in 5th grade, but cuz we fought too much, we decided to just remain friends.

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« Reply #13 on: December 17, 2005, 11:02:45 PM »
I haven't fallen for any of the guys...well they aren't really my friends...they're just...nice to me. But that's not all that you need to do to be someone's friend.

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« Reply #14 on: December 17, 2005, 11:08:45 PM »
Well at least they're truly nice to you! If ANYONE except a couple of the girls who I sit with are nice to me then they're just trying to use me. They all act totally fake towards me and laugh at me even though I don't buy it.