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« on: March 22, 2006, 11:27:47 PM »
Everyone is the usual after season 8.Michelle is 9,Stephanie is 14,and DJ is almost 20 and married to Steve.
They are ready for their baby.


DJ-Hey Steph!How do you like this little shirt for the baby?
Stephanie-I love it Deej.But I thought you didnt know the gender yet.
DJ-We dont,but we thought it would be cute for a boy or a girl.
Steve-(coming in)I think it's the cutest little outfit.
Michelle-When will the baby be here DJ?
DJ-(stars feeling contractions)O,not for a while.
(another contraction comes,but DJ ignores it)
DJ-Uhh...Steve...ow...
Stephanie-Are you OK Deej?
DJ-(feels the heaviest contraction)Who am I kidding?Yes!Go get Dad!
Michelle-DJ!My new cousin will be here soon!
DJ-Michelle,you will be the baby's aunt.You will have a niece or a nephew soon,not a new cousin.
Michelle-I'm gonna be an aunt!Awsome!(starts singing)I'm gonna be an au-nt!I'm gonna be an au-nt!
Danny-(racing downstairs)DJ,you're having your baby?
DJ-(moaning)Yes!
Becky-I'll take her to the hospital.Who wants to come?
Michelle-Me!Me!
Danny-No thanks!I'd be too nervous.
Stephanie-I will!
Joey-I'll come.
Becky-OK,Danny,Jess,you stay here.We'll call you when the baby's been born.
Becky-DJ,lets go.

(at the hospital)
Becky-How do you feel DJ?
DJ-The contractions are getting heavy.
Michelle-Do you have a name?
(the doctor comes in)
Doctor-Ready DJ?
DJ-Yes.Umm doctor?
Doctor-Yes?
DJ-Can my family stay in here?I dont mind,really.Even my pesky sisters can stay.
Doctor-This little girl will have to leave.(pointing at Michelle)You cannot be in the birth room if you're under nine.
Michelle-But I am nine.
Doctor-Really?OK,you can stay.Yes your family can stay.
DJ-OK.
Doctor-Ready?1,2,3,4,5,6,7,you can do it!8,9,10.Deep breath.
Joey-C'Mon DJ.Think of Mr.Woodchuck!You can do it!
Michelle-(cheerleading)Go DJ!Yeah,yeah,go DJ,go DJ.Go DJ,DJ,DJ!
Steve-Go DJ !You can do it!
DJ-This doesnt hurt!
Doctor-Thats quite common.The head is out!
Stephanie-C'Mon DJ!It's OK,we're here!
Becky-Just a little bit more.
Doctor-They baby is here!
DJ-Yes!!
Doctor-You have a little girl!
Michelle-My niece!Yeah,yeah!
Joey-(crying)She's beautiful DJ.
Stephanie-What's her name?
DJ-Her name is Pamela Rose Hale.After Mom.
Becky-Good job,Deej.
Steve-Now we'll have a baby in the house.
Michelle-Hi Pammy.I'm your aunt,Michelle.
Joey-(on the phone)Danny the baby is here!C'Mon down.We'll tell you the name and gender when you get here.Bye.
DJ-Thanks for your support guys.That really helped me.
Stephanie-So I guess this will be the last of me being pesky, and nosey,and dumb,huh?
DJ-(laughing)Yes,it will.
(Danny,Jesse and the twins arive in the room)
Danny-Hi DJ!
Jesse-Boy or girl?
DJ-It's a girl.Her name is Pamela Rose Hale.
Danny-What a beautiful name.I love you DJ.And I love you to Pam.
Alex-O,enough of this mushy stuff.Lets have cake!You said we could have cake Uncle Danny.
Michelle-Yeah.
Becky-DJ,this is for you.(she hands her a box)
DJ-O,look Steve!It's a bear!
Steve-It's so cute!Thanks Rebecca.
Danny-(bringing in cake)Cake time!
Michelle-Yum,this looks good!
Everyone-Happy birthday Pam!

THE END

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« Reply #1 on: March 22, 2006, 11:28:39 PM »
pleez give it a lwtter greade an a comment

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« Reply #2 on: March 23, 2006, 12:37:49 AM »
A+ perfect 10 good job yougotitdude!

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« Reply #3 on: March 23, 2006, 10:03:09 PM »

A+ perfect 10 good job yougotitdude!

Thank you Queen Of Michelle Fans(QOMF)ne suggestions for my next 1?

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« Reply #4 on: March 23, 2006, 11:41:26 PM »

ne suggestions for my next 1?
Nothing in particular.  I can see an episode playing out similar to that, maybe not in the delivery room though, lol. But, that's what fanfic is for.


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« Reply #5 on: March 24, 2006, 11:19:32 PM »
Make a continuation of this one with Steph having a baby. great fanfic.

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« Reply #6 on: March 26, 2006, 10:07:59 PM »
It's a nice fanfiction, but the way it is put together is annoying. Space out the names and what they say a bit more. And maybe try writing in the story form, it's more advanced.

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« Reply #7 on: March 27, 2006, 01:54:55 AM »
I guess that way there's less of a traffic jam of words.  I don't really have a problem with the format though.


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« Reply #8 on: March 27, 2006, 11:22:57 AM »
I don't have such a problem with it, but there aren't any spaces which just gets on my nerves, stops me from reading it. I'm just saying, if you want to be more professional, use the book format.  ;)

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« Reply #9 on: March 27, 2006, 11:10:29 PM »
I think the spacing thing would be a good idea though.  And story format would be fine as well, so long as you follow the new paragraph for each new speaker rule.


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« Reply #10 on: April 16, 2006, 07:33:19 PM »

Make a continuation of this one with Steph having a baby. great fanfic.

i will rightttt.............NOW!