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« Reply #15 on: June 25, 2006, 05:25:14 AM »
Ok. Fixed it.
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"Some dont believe he ever existed, but that isnt true. He was here, and he was real. The real question is what was he, and why was he here. Many rumors speculate as to what he was. Some believe he was some kind of demon worm creature who would pose as a librarian. Others believed he was an angel sent to spread the word of god. The truth is, I dont know what he was. All I know is what he taught me. Love, friendship, and what it means to truly live. Some call him a monster, something children are terrified by. I only know him by what he called himself. Weird 4." - nicest comment ever!

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« Reply #16 on: June 28, 2006, 08:30:45 PM »
Chapter 5: Future....

Joey and Angel DJ appeared in the Tanner house on March 12th, 2007. Future DJ was moving out and Future Danny and Jesse sobbed as DJ put her bags in the back of the taxi cab. Joey looked around and asked angel DJ, "Where am I?" Angel DJ faced Joey and said, "Well you moved out 2 months ago because Brittney Spears asked you to marry her and you said yes. Turns out Brittney and Kevin broke up 2 months after she asked you to marry her." Joey sighed and heard the radio say, "This just in, Brittney Spears had her 23rd baby this month! Luckily Joey Gladstone was coaching her."

"I can't believe my baby is moving to Steve's apartment!" Future Danny said sadly.

"It'll be ok. You have Stephanie and Michelle." Future Jesse sighed.

Future Stephanie and Michelle walked into the house and started skipping around the house all jolly. "Yay! She's gone! I get my own room!" Future Stephanie and Michelle said at the same time. Future Commet walked slowly into the room and gave a soft bark.

Joey faced angel DJ and said, "That's it! That's my life! You move out of the house. The house that gave you tons of memories..." Angel DJ sighed and said, "I had to marry Steve! He has hot abs..." Joey stomped on the floor and yelled, "Dang! I knew Steve coming here was a bad idea! He's a jerk! Now take me back to the present and get in your body!" Angel DJ nodded and they both returned to the present.

"Hey Dipwad! You lost?" Kimmy asked Joey meanly in the present.

"Now Kimmy! I know what you did. Now I think you should go home!" Joey yelled fierce.

"Try and catch me bub." Kimmy said and ran out of the room...

TO BE CONTINUED......
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"Some dont believe he ever existed, but that isnt true. He was here, and he was real. The real question is what was he, and why was he here. Many rumors speculate as to what he was. Some believe he was some kind of demon worm creature who would pose as a librarian. Others believed he was an angel sent to spread the word of god. The truth is, I dont know what he was. All I know is what he taught me. Love, friendship, and what it means to truly live. Some call him a monster, something children are terrified by. I only know him by what he called himself. Weird 4." - nicest comment ever!

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« Reply #17 on: July 03, 2006, 11:24:55 PM »
Chapter 6: Buh-Bye Gibbler

Angel DJ and Joey returned to the hospital and Joey said, "I can't believe you're gone." Angel DJ smiled and said, "Not really. You can think of it as me passing out. I really need to get back into my body. Don't worry. Things will get a lot better." Angel DJ floated off the ground and went inside her body. DJ woke up and Danny stopped crying and said, "Thank God your okay! I was afraid you would die like Pam did." Jesse nodded and said, "Pam was very nice to me. She would listen to Elvis with me...She was pretty."

Danny smiled and said, "You're right..I thought the same thing."

Kimmy ran into the room with Steve and Steve was wearing a bowtie. "What's goingon?" DJ asked. Kimmy walked towards DJ and slapped her! "Never get near me again!" Kimmy yelled and turned around. "Sorry Deej. But Kimmy and I are getting married." Steve said as he nodded his head."Nooooooooooooooooo!!!" DJ screamed. It was the middle of the night. None of this happened. DJ turned on her light and she walked into the bathroom and splashed some water on her face. "It was just a dream." she thought. At Kimmy's house, Kimmy drempt the same thing except more happened. "Stay away from me!" DJ yelled. Kimmy stomped closer towards DJ and picked her up. Suddenly some officers bashed down the door and picked Kimmy up and threw her on the ground. Danny and Jesse gasped and kicked Kimmy in the face. Kimmy started bleeding and was sent to jail. Kimmy woke up with a scream and looked around. She was in her room.

"It was just a dream." Kimmy said.

THE END!!!
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"Some dont believe he ever existed, but that isnt true. He was here, and he was real. The real question is what was he, and why was he here. Many rumors speculate as to what he was. Some believe he was some kind of demon worm creature who would pose as a librarian. Others believed he was an angel sent to spread the word of god. The truth is, I dont know what he was. All I know is what he taught me. Love, friendship, and what it means to truly live. Some call him a monster, something children are terrified by. I only know him by what he called himself. Weird 4." - nicest comment ever!

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« Reply #18 on: July 03, 2006, 11:47:14 PM »
Uh was that the end of the story?
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« Reply #19 on: July 04, 2006, 02:34:15 AM »
Yeah...Pretty much..
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« Reply #20 on: July 04, 2006, 10:32:48 AM »
Well the story was ok, but a little short and you weren't very supportive of the details.
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