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Offline Alexa

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DANGER!!!!!!
« on: July 03, 2006, 08:33:15 PM »
well i thot id start seasons so here is season 9 by me  ;)
It is a week after the last episode

(it is 7:15 in the morning.Danny is having coffee at the kitchen table.Michell enters)

Michelle-Hi Daddy.
Danny-Hi Michelle.
Michelle-Hey guess what?
Danny-What?
Michelle-My friend Kara is having a party next Friday night.Can I go?
Danny-What time?
Michelle-7:30-11:00
Danny-Michelle!Thats late.I dont know if I want you out that late.
Michelle-Oh come on,Daddy,please?
Danny-Im sorry,Michelle.I dont want you out that late.
Michelle-That's not fair!(she runs upstairs as DJ and Stephanie are entering the kitchen)
Stephanie-Whats wrong with her?
Danny-She hates me.
DJ-Come on she doesnt hate you.What happened?
Danny-Her friend was having a really late party and I said she couldnt go.
Stephanie-You let me and DJ go to those kind of parties.What makes Michelle different?
Danny-Oh yeah...I did.But this party is 7:30-11:00!
DJ-When I was 8 you lt me go to a party that was 8:30-12:00.
Danny-Oh yeah I remember that.OK,Michelle can go.
Stephanie-Tell that to Michelle not us.
Danny-You're right.
TO BE CONTINUED
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« Reply #1 on: July 03, 2006, 08:47:29 PM »
First thought: Huh??????
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"Some dont believe he ever existed, but that isnt true. He was here, and he was real. The real question is what was he, and why was he here. Many rumors speculate as to what he was. Some believe he was some kind of demon worm creature who would pose as a librarian. Others believed he was an angel sent to spread the word of god. The truth is, I dont know what he was. All I know is what he taught me. Love, friendship, and what it means to truly live. Some call him a monster, something children are terrified by. I only know him by what he called himself. Weird 4." - nicest comment ever!

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DANGER!!!!!!
« Reply #2 on: July 03, 2006, 09:10:34 PM »
Umm...it really doesn't appear to have a "flow" effect in the plot. You've kind of got to transition slowly.
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DANGER!!!!!!
« Reply #3 on: July 03, 2006, 09:17:24 PM »
yeah.i had 2 go
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DANGER!!!!!!
« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2006, 09:53:17 PM »
since my friend aj told me what the plan was,i want to say it is a really good story
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DANGER!!!!!!
« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2006, 10:48:00 PM »
I remember this story from somewhere.  They are word from word.  I hope you didn't get this from another person  :o.
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