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Heaven or Hell?
« on: June 09, 2007, 09:38:23 PM »
Hey everyone! I will be starting a new fan fic in a couple of hours called Heaven or Hell? Its mainly about Stephanie and her cousin Aaron, but the rest of the family will be included in it too......
     I'll give you the ages right now:
DJ: 15
Stephanie: 10
Michelle: 5
and Danny, Joey, Jesse, and Bekcy are all the ages that they are in the 5th season
The twins have just been born. So they are babies.

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« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2007, 09:40:13 PM »
So is this the Aaron who is Michelle's friend or another one altogether?


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« Reply #2 on: June 09, 2007, 09:43:21 PM »
Sorry hold on lol. I'll fix this...
 ok i fixed it. Aaron is her cousin on her dad's side of the family.

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« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2007, 11:18:55 PM »
Heaven or Hell?
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Characters Ages:
(i forgot a few)
Aunt Susan: Danny's slightly older sister (one year older)
Megan: 14 (DJ, steph and Michelle's cousin)
Kamiley: (ka-miley) 6 (DJ, Steph, and Michelle's cousin)
Aaron: 10 (DJ, Steph and Michelles cousin)
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(We find Danny in the kitchen doing the dishes. Stephanie walks in the from upstairs)
Steph: Hey dad!
Danny: Good morning Steph!
Steph: So what time does Aunt Susan, Megan, Kamiley, and Aaron get here?
Danny: The plane gets in at noon. Are you excited to meet your long lost cousins?
Steph: ya, dad. I can't wait to meet them. They sound so nice! Where did you say they lived before?
Danny: They lived in Brazil. My sister moved there after she graduated from high school. She got married a few years later, and had kids. She was divorced last year, and decided to move to the U.S., so they're here visiting  to see if they like San Fransisco. Does that answer your question, Sweetheart?
Steph: Yeah dad, thanks.
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(We find Michelle in her room with Aunt Becky and Uncle Jesse)
Michelle: Uncle Jesse, where are the twins?
Jesse: Michelle, They're asleep in our room.
Michelle: oh, well when they get up can I hold them?
Becky: yeah, of course honey. But don't forget your other cousins are coming to visit today too.
Michelle: Oh ya! I can't wait!
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Hey! Please leave me any feedback. I'm sorry its so short and not much is done yet. But my dad is making me do the dishes. lol. so i'll finish it later. I might even just edit this post and add to it. Thanks for understanding! Bekah

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« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2007, 11:37:02 PM »
Hey sounds like its going to be really cool... can't wait to read more!

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« Reply #5 on: June 10, 2007, 12:43:50 AM »
Judging from the title and who's going to be involved in the story, I think I'll like this plot.  Can't wait for more.


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« Reply #6 on: June 10, 2007, 02:56:36 AM »
Yeah... you've definitely caught my interest. We haven't had a fanfic here in ages. Hope to see more soon.  ;D

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« Reply #7 on: June 10, 2007, 03:02:39 AM »
I've noticed ever since you joined the Fanfic board has been robust, bekah.  Thanks for sparking this area up again.  ;)


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« Reply #8 on: June 11, 2007, 12:58:48 AM »
Hey everyone! It sounds like you really want to hear more and I can't wait to update it! I had a gymnastics awards banquet and I have cheer practice tonight but I don't have homework so I'll update it as soon as I get home! By later tonight or tomorrow you can read more!
HEAVEN....or HELL???
lol
Bekah

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« Reply #9 on: June 11, 2007, 01:33:28 AM »
Thanks for the update.  I'm sure most of us are looking forward to see you continue on with this.


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« Reply #10 on: June 11, 2007, 01:47:50 AM »
I know I am excited about you updating...   ;)

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« Reply #11 on: June 11, 2007, 06:28:58 AM »
(Its now 11:30 and we find Danny in the living room with Steph)
Danny: Everyone, if you're not down here in 30 seconds we're leaving without you!
Steph: Dad, its ok. It'll be fine.
Danny: 20 seconds!
*Becky and Jesse walk in with the twins. they are carrying alot of stuff.*
Jesse: OK Danny we're here, are you happy now?
Danny: 10 seconds!
*Joey walks in, followed by Michelle, and DJ.*
Joey: OK Danny, we're all here now.
Danny: Move out troops!
(They all walk out the front door)
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(We find the whole family in the airport next to the baggage claim)
Joey: Danny, do you think that they'll be here soon?
Danny: Joey, I said at noon.
Joey: Did you forget that I'm a time dislexic?
Jesse: (messes up his hair) Its 11:58 right now they'll be here any minute.
Joey: Good, I'm hoping that Susan and I can get to know each other.
Becky: you never know, Joey. Hey can you take Nicky for a minute? I have to use the restroom.
(Becky hands Nicky to Joey, and walks off towards the sign that says restroom. Meanwhile, Susan, Megan, Kamiley, and Aaron walk off the plane and over towards the Tanners.)
Danny: There they are! (calling to his sister) Susan!
(They see them and walk over. Danny gives his sister a hug, followed by everyone else.)
Susan: Danny,everyone, this is Megan (points to a medium height girl) Kamiley (points to an adorable 6 year old girl) and Aaron. (points to a cute little boy with blonde hair and blue eyes.)
Everyone: Hi
Danny: Nice to meet you all. And this is Jesse, (points to Jesse) and his wife Rebecca went to use the restroom but she'll be right back, and their twin boys Nicky and Alex (points to the twins then looks at Joey.) Not this big kid, the baby he's holding is Nicky. (Laughs at his own joke) This is Joey (points to Joey) and my three daughters DJ (points to DJ) Stephanie (points to steph) and Michelle (points to michelle)
Her kids: Hi
Susan: Nice to meet you all too.
(Becky walks over)
Becky: Hey guys.
Danny: Becky, this is my sister susan, her daughters Megan and Kamiley, and her son Aaron. (points accordingly)
Becky: Nice to meet you. *walks over to Jesse and whispers* Jess I have to tell you something later!
Jesse: (whispering back) okay hunny, how about tonight when we get home.
Danny: So, lets not all just stand here. How about we go out to Dinner?
Susan: That sounds great.
Danny: So kids (talking to her kids) Wheres your favorite place to eat?
Kamiley: I like Chucky Cheese!
Michelle: you got it dude!
Aaron: Well, I like Pizza
Steph: Hey, me too!
DJ: I don't care, but I am kinda in the mood for italian. Megan wheres your favorite place?
Megan: Well, In brazil we dont have very much American food. So that sounds great.
Danny: then we'll all go to Marco's. Its an All American food place very close to here.
*they all go out to the parking lot, get in the car and leave*
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(We find everyone at Marco's)
Waiter 1: Hi, Welcome to Marco's, how many tonight?
Danny: I'm sorry we don't have a reservation! But we have...8..9..10..11...12...yes 12 people.
Waiter 1: Ok well we can seat you in a few minutes.
Danny: thank you so much. *slips her $20*
*they all walk over to the waiting area*
Steph: So Megan, what do you like to do for fun in Brazil?
Megan: I don't know. I usually just hang out with my friends. But things have been messed up between us lately. I don't know if they're even still my friends.
DJ: I'm so sorry. I'll show you how to have a good time this week in San Fransisco.
Aaron: I want have a good time too.
Steph: Then its settled, (to DJ) So deej, its alright it we all go together?
DJ: Of course Steph.
Steph: So Aaron, do you like hiking?
Aaron: yeah, why?
Steph: well I thought it would be cool if we went sometime this week, just the two of us?
Aaron: ok, sure, why not
(the waitress walks over)
Waitress 2: We can seat you now, follow me
(they all get up and follow her over to a table)
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(We find them all at the Tanner house after a very long time at Marco's)
Danny: So, how'd you all like Dinner?
Megan and DJ: It was great, thanks
Megan: whoa that was weird!
DJ: I know. Its like we already know each other so well.
(they hug)
Steph: thanks Dad, I loved it!
Aaron: yeah, same here! American food is great!
Kamiley: yeah, Its really good!
Michelle: You got it dude!
Kamiley: Is that all you say?
Michelle: of course not silly. Lets go up to my room and play!
Danny: Ok michelle, you two have fun
Joey, Jesse and Becky: Thanks for Dinner, Danny.
Jesse: Beck, lets go up to our room, put the twins to bed, then we can talk, okay?
Becky: yeah Jess. thats great
(They walk upstairs with the twins)
Joey: So, Susan, do you like Coffee?
Susan: Yes Joey, thanks.
Joey: no problem. follow me
(Joey and Susan walk into the kitchen)
DJ: Megan, lets go to my room, we can watch Dirty Dancing or something
Megan: Dirty Dancing? I love that movie! It was on tv in Brazil! Patrick Swazy is amazing!
DJ: then lets go!
(DJ and Megan walk upstairs)
Steph:*to aaron* Do you like frozen yogurt? (he nods) *to danny*( Hey dad, is it ok if Aaron and I walk down the street to get frozen yogurt?
Danny: Sure Steph, just be back within a half hour, it'll be getting dark soon.
Steph: ya dad, no problem.
(Danny walks upstairs to his room, as Steph and Aaron walk out the door)
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Sorry guys! its getting late and I have school tomorrow! Sorry the plots not really coming through yet, I just have to set up for it alot. I had a dream about this, only with me and my cousin, so i decided to turn it into a fan fic, but you know how dreams are...so confusing! They aren't complete stories! So i'm doing my best. I'll continue writing more tomorrow after school! Hope you like it so far! ~Bekah~

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« Reply #12 on: June 11, 2007, 10:41:01 AM »
Wow this is amazing, just spell check it though and try not to have Michelle use "ya" to much it seems a little out of character, other wise very, very, good.
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« Reply #13 on: June 11, 2007, 09:11:49 PM »
Interesting story so far.  I'll be waiting to read more of it.  Thanks for posting!


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« Reply #14 on: June 11, 2007, 11:21:21 PM »
It's great so far... like MT Fan a little spell check would help it... can't wait to read more