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DJ, Michelle, and . . . Oh Yeah, Stephanie
« on: July 01, 2007, 11:05:01 PM »
The title format might seem familiar haha, and I thought it would be kind of cool. Ok, so here is the description:
DJ and Michelle have been spending a lot of time together, and Stephanie feels left out. Then, it seems as if everyone is ignoring Stephanie, so she has a plan that will make everyone notice her. Meanwhile, Jesse loses Mr. Goodpart.

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It's the beginning of season 3
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-In DJ and Stephanie's room-
Michelle-Hi DJ, hi Stephie
DJ-Hi Michelle.
Michelle-Stephie do you want to play with me?
Stephanie-Sorry Michelle, I'm playing school with my stuffed animals.
Michelle-I play, too.
Stephanie-Sorry kid. Talk to DJ!
Michelle-DJ, wanna play?
DJ-Sure Michelle. Lets go to your room and play Candyland.
Michelle-Yay! Candyland! -DJ and Michelle leave-
Stephanie-Haha, Candyland. Boy, have I outgrown that silly game.
-Harry walks in-
Harry-Hi Stephanie
Stephanie-Harry, hi!
Harry-Wanna play Candyland, Chief?
Stephanie-Of course I would!
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-In Jesse's room-
Jesse--singing to himself and looking through is comb/moose/spray rack-I have such good hair, yes I have such good--AHHHHH!!!! Call 911 HELP!!!!!
-Danny and Joey come running in-
Danny-Jess, what in the world is going on in here!
Jesse-Ah, Mr, Good, gone, bye! -starts panting-
Joey-What, did you run out of moose?
Jesse-No, Joesph, I-I-I...-starts panting again-
Danny-Jesse...
Jesse-I lost Mr. Goodpart! My dad gave him to me when I was five and said, "Son, here is your very first comb. Comb your hair with him ALWAYS!" And I named him Mr. Goodpart and-
-Joey and Danny start laughing-
Joey-Mr. Goodpart, AHAHAHA!
Jesse-Mr. Goodpart is very special to me! He, well, kept my hair good parted...oh just help me look for him!
-Danny and Joey follow Jesse out of his room, laughing-
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-In DJ and Stephanie's room. Stephanie just entered while Michelle and DJ are playing Barbies-
Stephanie-Hey Deej, wanna play--Oh, you're playing with Michelle?
DJ-Hi, Stephanie. We're having fun, right Michelle?
Michelle-Right DJ!
DJ-Well, see ya, kid!
Stephanie-This is my room too, you know.
DJ-Well then. Come on Michelle, we'll go to your room. This way Stephanie can't pester us. -DJ walks into Michelle's room-
Michelle-Bye-bye Stephie. -Michelle walks into her room-
Stephanie-Gee, why is DJ suddenly Michelle's biggest fan! -Stephanie walks over to her bed and hugs Mr. Bear-
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-at night in the hallway-
Joey-Hey Michelle, I'll be right in to read you a bedtime story.
DJ-Oh, it's OK Joey, I'm reading to Michelle tonight.
-Stephanie comes out from the bathroom-
Stephanie-DJ, you said we were going to play cards tonight!
DJ-Too bad, kid. Michelle and me are gonna have our fun. Go watch Barney.
Stephanie-How rude! -She stomps into DJ and Stephanie's room-
Joey-OK, goodnight girls. -kisses DJ and Michelle-
DJ-Night Joey.
Michelle-Goodnight Joey.
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-At breakfast the next day. It's Saturday-
Stephanie-Hey Daddy, can you take me to the mall today? I gotta go see the new Barbie they released today.
Danny-I'm sorry, Steph, but I'm gonna be gone all day. I'm going over to Becky's to work on next weeks shows and then Jesse, Joey and I are going out to dinner and a movie. Ask your sister if she'll take you. I gotta go, bye. -Danny leaves-
Jesse-I'm going to look for Mr. Goodpart, help me Joseph.
Joey-OK, Jess, lets go. -they leave-
Stephanie-DJ, can you take me to the mall?
DJ-Sorry, Michelle and I are going to the mall today.
Stephanie-Well, can I come with you guys?
DJ-Nope. We're going to the toy store to spend some of Michelle's birthday money, and then we're going to the Hasse to get matching outfits! Wont we look cute?
Stephanie-I guess so, but--
Michelle-Ouce cream!
DJ-Oh yeah, and we;re getting ice cream. See ya! -DJ and Stephanie leave-
-Stephanie starts crying and runs upstairs-
Stephanie-Nobody loves me anymore! DJ doesn't even like me anymore! She is always hanging out with Michelle, and she doesn't even wanna spend time with me! And Daddy, Joey and uncle Jesse don't love me either! They just plan something last minute and Daddy doesn't even kiss me goodbye! And of course he kisses DJ and Michelle! Nobody loves me anymore! Ugh! -she cries for a few more seconds then perks up-I might have an idea! -she runs and gets a piece of paper and a pen and writes a note. The note says:
Dear Family,
Nobody loves me anymore so I've decided that I am going to kill myself. DJ only loves Michelle, and Daddy, Uncle Jesse and Joey only want to hang out with each other and DJ and Michelle. Uncle Jesse only wanted to look for Mr. Goodpart instead of hang out with me. Daddy didn't even kiss me goodbye, but he kissed DJ and Michelle. I know you guys wont miss me, even though I'll miss you. But you will me much happier if I'm dead. DJ will only have Michelle, and she won't be pestered by me anymore. And Daddy, Uncle Jesse, and Joey will only have to kiss two girls. I wish I was still loved, or else I wouldn't have to do this. But I guess this is goodbye. I love you all. I know you won't even notice that I'm gone, but oh well. You have each other. I'll miss you all, and tell Michelle best of luck in everything she does.
I won't see you later,
Stephanie Judith Tanner
Oh and I want to be buried with Mr. Bear. So he will always be with me.

-Stephanie walks out of her room and into the bathroom. She takes a huge handful of ibuprofen pills and closes the lid tight-

*TO BE CONTINUED*

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« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2007, 02:22:28 AM »
-Stephanie has the pills in her hand and is filling up a glass of water. She still has the note in her hand and is lifting up the pills to her mouth when-
-Jesse and Joey enter-
Jesse-Stephanie Judith Tanner, what are you doing?!
Stephanie-Killing myself! Nobody loves me anymore!
Jesse--screaming-STEPHANIE JUDITH TANNER! -starts to cry- We love you very very very much! -Hugs Stephanie tightly-
Joey-Stephanie, we love you three girls more than ANYTHING in the world!
Stephanie-Everyone loves DJ and Michelle more than me! -She starts to cry- DJ started to hang out with Michelle, and she wouldn't make time for me. They went to the mall and they wouldn't let me come! And they were gonna get matching outfits, and they weren't going to get one for me! And you guys and Daddy kissed everyone but me goodbye! I felt so terrible, but no one cared!
Joey-Of course we would have cared, Sweetheart. We love you! -he starts crying and hugging Stephanie-
Jesse-Let me see this note -he grabs the note from Stephanie and reads it. Then he bursts into tears- Stephanie! I'm so sorry! I didn't know! I didn't know, Steph! Honey, I love you so much!
Stephanie-You love Mr. Goodpart more than me! I asked you to bring me to the mall and you said you couldn't. You had to find Mr. Goodpart!
Jesse-Stephanie, I love you and your sisters more than ANYTHING in the world! Don't EVER say that I love some stupid Elvis comb more than you. You're my pal and I love you so much.
Joey-Stephanie, don't EVER think of doing this ever again! If you're having a problem, just tell us. Interrupt us if you have to. Nothing is more important than you, Sweetheart. If you have an emergency, then we are all ears. We never want to see you get hurt, and we never want to see you try to pull this on us again, because we would miss you so much, I don't have a clue what we would do. Everyone in this house loves you Stephanie. And no one wants to see you hurting. Ok honey?
Stephanie-OK. Thanks, guys. I won't EVER do this again.
Jesse-All right!
-they hug and kiss Stephanie-
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-when everyone is home-
Jesse--yelling- Everyone come down to the living room immediately!
-DJ and Michelle come in-
DJ-Ok, we're here.
-Danny and Becky come in-
Danny-What is it Jess, did you find Mr. Goodpart?
Jesse-NO! This is a serious problem, and something dreaful almost happened. Stephanie, you have the floor.
Stephanie-OK. Well, for the past few days I have felt unloved. DJ only had time for Michelle, and she didn't want to play with me. She wouldn't let me come to the mall with her and Michelle. And then Daddy, Uncle Jesse and Joey didn't have time for me either. And they kissed everyone but me goodbye. I got really sad and upset. I thought of doing something bad. I thought of killing myself. If it wasn't for Joey and Uncle Jesse, I wouldn't be here right now. I would have died. And now I know that you love me...and I will never never think of doing anything like this ever again.
Danny-STEPHANIE! You thought of KILLING yourself?! COme here honey! -hugs Stephanie-
Stephanie-I'm sorry, I felt like no one cared.
Becky-Stephanie honey we will always care! And we will always love you very much! -hugs Stephanie- I'm glad you're here.
Stephanie-Thanks. All of you guys care about me. But not DJ.
DJ-Stephanie! I almost lost my little sister today! When you told me I was all shook up! Don't say that I don't care about you, because I do! And I love you! -DJ hugs Stephanie-
Stephanie-Yeah, but you love Michelle more!
DJ-No I don't! I may have been hanging out with her a lot, but that doesn't mean I love her more!
Stephanie-You wouldn't let me come with you to the mall today! You and Michelle got matching outfits. But not me! You took her shopping and everything! That hurt my feelings, DJ! It really did!
DJ-I'm sorry. -she sits down by Stephanie- The reason I didn't want you at the mall with us, is because we were shopping for you!
Stephanie-What?
DJ-Well, you helped me with that science project. Remember the energy ball? If it wasn't for you, I would have failed. And the way you saved Michelle's bunny by sewing his head on even though you can't sew was pretty incredible, too. And the way you helped me get everyone together when we were in Hawaii. Michelle and I wanted to show you how much we appreciated what you did for us. So we have a few things for you. -DJ reaches behind and pulls out two wrapped packages and hands them to Stephanie- Here. These are from Michelle and me.
Stephanie--opening the first one- WOW! What a terrific outfit! It's a dress with built in leggings! Is this the matching outfits? -DJ and Michelle hold up the same outfit- All right! We all got matching outfits! Thanks! -she opens the second one- All right! The new barbie! Thanks DJ! Thanks Michelle!
DJ-And when we were so called ''playing'' we were looking through catalogs looking for the right outfit for the three of us.
Stephanie-Really?! Oh, but...you called me a pest.
DJ-Well maybe I was a little harsh. I'm sorry Steph.
Stephanie-Thats OK -DJ and Stephanie hug, then Stephanie and Michelle hug-
Danny-You see Steph? Do you know how devastated we would have been if you went through with it today? We love you Stephanie. -Danny hugs her-
Jesse-You mean a lot more to us than an Elvis comb, Stephanie.
Michelle-I love you, Stephie.
Stephanie-I love you too Michelle -she gives Michelle another hug-
Joey-Stephanie, like I said, if you have a problem, talk to us.
DJ-And if the guys or Becky aren't around, you can talk to me.
Michelle-Me too!
Danny--laughs-You see? Your surrounded with love, Sweetie. And you could never be forgotten or replaced.
All but Stephanie-We love you Stephanie!
-Comet runs in-
Jesse-Hey, what does Comet have in his teeth? -Jesse pulls the black item from Comet's jaw- It's Mr. Goodpart!
Everyone-Hurray!
Danny-It's about time!
Michelle-You got it dude!

*THE END*

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« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2007, 03:55:11 PM »
I like the original plot idea, but just a few things I want to mention.

1. What happened to Harry?  He was there for part of the one scene and seemed to disappear.
2.  Unless DJ was planning on walking, I don't she'd be able to take anyone to the mall on her own.  But maybe that's what you meant there.
3.  I don't think the suicide idea works well for the show, especially in the 3rd season.  It just feels really morbid and even if it's diverging from the FH atmosphere, I don't think someone that young would go to something like that.


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« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2007, 09:33:30 PM »
Whoops lol, I kinda forgot about Harry. She didn't have any significant friends at the time, so I just went with a different one.

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« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2007, 01:00:47 AM »
Harry was still there at the beginning of season 3 I think (although only for one episode).  I didn't know if that was intentional or just that he kind of drifted off.  Obviously the idea wouldn't have as much value if she had someone else to play with during the whole thing, lol.


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« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2007, 09:30:35 PM »
I liked it a lot!! Great job! It's one of my favorites.

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« Reply #6 on: July 04, 2007, 02:26:40 AM »
Thank you, Pretty in Pink!  ;D Glad you like it!

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« Reply #7 on: July 14, 2007, 07:18:55 PM »
i almost cried...that was so good. I agree with fullhouseforever about steph commiting suicide..it just doesnt fit in the fh atmosphere. I also dont know how stephanie would know at 3rd grade that an overdose of pills can kill you. but otherwise..great job

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« Reply #8 on: August 04, 2007, 12:43:21 AM »
Hey i havent had a chance to finish reading yet but what i have read was absolutely amazing and I loved it!!!! KEEP IT UP!