Sleepy Danny...

[weird4]

Season 10
Episode 3

(Theme plays. Screen fades in on the Tanner House. It's 10:30 at night.)
Danny: Are you ready?
Becky: Almost. What should I wear?
Danny: What you wore on that other show...
Becky: A tutu?
Danny: Wait that was Halloween...You were a princess.
Jesse: (walks in.) Woah there! Where are you guys going out this late?
Danny: Didn't we tell you about our new job?
Jesse: Not from what I know.
Becky: We told you yesterday. "Good Night San Francisco" Ring a bell?
Jesse: (pauses) Nope..
Joey: Good luck on your show!! And Danny, here's some pills you can take so you can stay up longer.
Danny: Pills?
Joey: You know those sugar pills?
Danny: I dunno...What if it's sleeping pills?
Joey: Why would I do that?
Becky: Come on Danny. We're going to be late..
(Becky and Danny exit. Cut to commercial.)

[fullhouseforever]

I like how you're continuing from your other fanfic about Danny and Becky's show.  It has my attention so far.

[weird4]

(Screen fades in. We see Danny and Becky walking out to the set in their outfits for the show. Ms. Strawbridge greets them.)

Ms. Strawbridge: Hello Rebeca. (looks over at Danny.) Tanner.
Danny: Ma'm.
Ms. Strawbridge: Let me show you around. This is the food table. If you need anything, feel free to come here anytime. (shows Danny and Becky the set.) This is your seats and just for you Danny, your own chair.
Danny: (sits in the chair.) This is nice. Comfy. Relaxing...Sleeepyyyy......
(Airhorn blows. Danny jumps off the chair.)
Ms. Strawbridge: That's the signal.
Becky: For what?
Ms. Strawbridge: The shows going to air in 30 seconds.
Danny: (stumles around.) Out of my way. (grabs some sugar, sodas, donuts, ect.)
Becky: (pulls Danny to his seat.) Danny! Have you gone crazy?
Danny: (with mouth stuffed.) Oh..no. Beck, don't even think that. I would neve-
Ms. Strawbridge: Uhh...We're live..
Becky: (looks at camera.) Hi...I'm Rebeca Donaldson.
Danny: (still with mouth stuffed.) And I'm Danny Tanner.
Becky: This is our first show and....
(music starts playing and streamers fall from the sky.)
Danny: (gulp) HEYYYY EVERYBODY!! IT'S...(streamer falls in his mouth. Danny pulls out the streamer.) Streamers?
Becky: Wow...Uh..There's a first.
(At the Tanners.)
Jesse: Look at this. (points to screen.) Danny's embarassing everyone. And it isn't morning..
Joey: (with mouth stuffed.) Tell me about it. It's harder than it looks.
(Back to the set.)
Becky: There'll be more after this commercial.
(Bell rings. Danny sighs.)
Danny: What the heck was that?
Ms. Strawbridge: The celebration.
Danny: What kind of celebration was that? It almost gave me a heart attack.
Ms. Strawbridge: So? If you fall asleep on the show, I swear you'll be fired before you can say, "Bobs your uncle."
Danny: Oh...Okay..
(30 mins into the show.)
Danny: (drunkly) And I remember when I first started working with Becky here. I was soooo madly in love with her. I'll even do somthing so embarassing so Jess, prepare to say Have Mercy..(leans towards Rebecca.)
Rebecca: Uh..(pushes Danny away.) Sorry about that folks. While Danny is being, "toxinated" in Loony World, let's get an update on the weather...
Booming voice: COLD.
(Danny opens his eyes quickly.)
Danny: Yes God?
Ms. Strawbridge: Tanner!
Danny: Sorry...Uh......That was Manny Tanner...My...drunk evil twin....
(Cut to commercial.)

[MT Fan]

I guess I just can't see Danny switching from the morning to evening news, mainly because he wouldn't be home with the girls. But the dialogue is also a little ridiculous, can you really picture Danny and Becky letting that hapeen.

[fullhouseforever]

MT Fan bring up a good point that Danny (and even Becky) wouldn't be home at night.  If this was a temporary thing, I guess it could work though.

[Pretty in Pink]

its pretty good but i do agree with MT Fan and fhf

[weird4]

(Screen fades in. Ms. Strawbridge is talking to Danny.)

Ms. Strawbridge: TANNER!! What are you doing to my network!?
Danny: I didn't do anything. Honest.
Ms. Strawbridge: Danny. You wanted this job didn't you?
Danny: Yes ma'm.
Ms. Strawbridge: Well you better get a grip. Or else...you're fired..
Danny: (glups) Fired?
Ms. Strawbridge: Yes...You better stay awake...
Danny: I'll try.
Becky: Come on Danny. Shows going to start in 10 seconds.
Danny: Uhh...coming...
(The next day. Danny is reading the newspaper. Jesse walks in.)
Jesse: What ya reading?
Danny: The critics review..
Jesse: And???
Danny: "Good Night San Francisco premeared at 1:00 AM and I must say, it was good."
Jesse: So it was a success..
Danny: "For 15 seconds. Danny Tanner had some difficulty staying up during the show. The best part was when Danny stumbled as he tried to stay up. What a whimp."
Jesse: Awww....
Danny: Let's face it...I stunk.
Jesse: No you didn't.
News reporter on television screen: Breaking news!! Danny Tanner is now the ignorent fool of Good Night San Francisco, but ratings have gone up. What crazy stuff will happen next?
(Laughter. Screen fades out. THE END)

[I♥MeTrO StAtiON♥]

i think thats a great fanfic! great job!

[Alexa]

Agreed. It was very nice!